• ArcticAmphibian
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    1 year ago

    Very nice. The first sentence is a bit of a run-on. The three question marks is a bit too informal. The sentence “If, on the other hand, the redistributed software, want to be sold too, must be purchased as it is equivalent to a for-profit company” has grammatical errors. Keep writing!