Looks good. You have liner on one eye and not on the other, which is the only thing that I really saw.

Your proportions, expression, colors, composition, etc., are great.****

I think it’s really good. Keep at it! What software are you using?

I love the art style and facial expression. It feels like a very relatable moment - like when you hear something wild in public and can’t help but turn to look.

It has a lot going for it.

If there was more contrast on the face (so it’s less flat) and thicker eyelids (less white of the eyes as well or maybe they’re too uniformly white), I’d wager the face would “pop out” more.

It’s coming along nicely!

A lot of personality shining through here