• Aussiemandeus@aussie.zone
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    1 year ago

    Not bad i like it.

    The eternal English student within me wants to try and break it down, but i like the simple message

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      1 year ago

      i have to admit i wrote it in like ten minutes because i was Inspired and didn’t think too much about the symbolism, but i think it gets the message across and i’m really glad you like it! the message was something i’ve been trying to put into words for a while but found it really difficult to do before i made a poem out of it. it’s funny how some ideas are naturally suited to expression through poetry